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Battle of Dimensions Prologue

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In a null-void like dimension, two powerful beings of two different worlds are conversing.

One of the beings has a giant mechanical form, one of the most powerful from it's home, but is told to stay on an island that is supposedly non-existent. It's name is Brutaka, and has caused enough damage to the human dimension, but is bored and seeks excitement from massive casualties from two different beings. Brutaka comes from the dimension of the Bionicle, world of mechanical organisms that are at war with the evil Makuta.
The next being is a being of pure darkness, born when a master made a new home. That being used others for its bidding and to shift the balance of good and evil in his land, to usher in a new era of darkness. He is the Overlord, once banished into the dark island now just watching over his dimension, waiting for a right time.

The two are discussing over which one of their “protectors of the dimension” would win in a battle. “The Toa Nuva could win any battle with these “ninja” you speak of my old friend.” Brutaka said carefree. “The ninjas could easliy destroy the Toa, so I beg to differ Brutaka!” Overlord spat out. Both had an idea. “To decide this conflict.” “We must put them to the test” the two agreed on. Overlord was rejoicing, “If the ninja do lose, they'll die and I'll take over Ninjago with no complications!” Brutaka agreed with this battle idea, “I feel that this “game” can relive me of my constant boredom on my boring non-existence island.” “Then it's settled” Brutaka said, “This will be...”

“A Battle of Dimensions!”
*Saronicle's story "Brutaka's Game" gave me the idea to do this. This is just the beginning, I'll do my best to get chapter 1 up tomorrow, no promises it's my brother's birthday so that could stop me. Enjoy the prologue~!
Overlord belongs to :iconninjagoplz:
Brutaka belongs to :iconbionicleplz:
Null-void like dimension is mine!
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InfamousHN's avatar
to me this seemed really boring and this is what it was about, two powers bored and make a deal for people to fight. doesn't seem that interesting really.

i recommend you put some thought by putting down the storyline into events then you can just stretch the detail out to a story and a prologue instead of just winging it. but this is just me